高考英語作文搶分攻略：考前必知五大高分特點！
一、寫作目的明確，圍繞主題組織材料 (不跑題，不偏離主題）
高考英語書面表達部分要求考生能有效運用所學語言知識，準確運用語法知識，使用一定量的詞匯和句型，清楚、連貫地傳遞信息，表達思想。閱卷老師關注的是考生能否圍繞主題組織材料，寫作內容是否切題，短文的結構是否完整，表達是否正確，語言是否得體，行文是否連貫，前后文是否具有邏輯性。 有些考生在審題環節沒有弄清楚寫作目的，導致寫作內容偏離主題，甚至完全跑題，雖然考生盡量使用復雜的結構進行寫作，但還是沒能圓滿完成寫作任務。
【典例1】假如你叫李華，負責為班級的英語墻報提供稿件。請根據下面的一幅圖畫，以"On Our Way to School"為題，為墻報寫一篇稿件。 注意：詞數100左右。Rabbits tend to be quiet and alert.屬兔的人更傾向于是安靜派和警覺派。
【思路分析】從這幅漫畫中，我們看到一些學生在過馬路時，有的低頭看手機，有的陶醉在音樂中。他們全然沒有注意過往的車輛，這存在著嚴重的安全隱患。 短文的標題暗示文章的主題是"上學途中的安全問題"。考生應圍繞漫畫所反映的學生上學途中的安全問題展開論述，分析學生們在馬路上玩手機帶來的嚴重后果，引起大家對這個問題的關注。最后，應針對在上學途中應怎么做提出個人看法，呼吁大家放下手機，確保交通安全。
【學生習作】
On Our Way to School From the picture we can see that some students concentrate on their smart phones on the way to school. They pay no attention to the cars next to them. Attracted by the smart phones, the students spend most of their time on the virtual world. As senior high school students, it is our responsibility to study hard, and not bury ourselves in the virtual world, especially on our way to school. Besides, using the phone is bad for our eyes when crossing the street. Personally, we should not use the smart phones to live a safe life. So the students should not be allowed to take smart phones to their schools.
【名師點撥】
雖然作者在第一段比較準確地描述了漫畫的內容，第二段針對漫畫所反映的問題進行了分析。但是，第二段的內容并沒有緊緊圍繞"On Our Way to School"這個主題來展開。作者分析了學生們沉迷于手機的問題，而不是在上學路上玩手機可能導致的嚴重后果。最后作者得出的結論是：So the students should not be allowed to take smart phones to their schools.這與短文的主題不一致。一旦文章寫跑題，即使語言錯誤較少，考生也很難得高分。
【高分范文】
On Our Way to School From the picture we can see some students staring at their smart phones or iPads while crossing the street. They dont watch out for the passing cars or the pedestrians around them, which calls for our attention. All of us should be careful of the passing cars on our way to school. If we dont follow the traffic lights, we can put ourselves at risk. Besides, many traffic accidents result from pedestrians running the red light. Personally, safety is the first. Lets put our iPads or smart phones away on our way to school. We should always follow the traffic lights and not run the red light to keep away from accidents.
高考英語書面表達部分要求考生能有效運用所學語言知識，準確運用語法知識，使用一定量的詞匯和句型，清楚、連貫地傳遞信息，表達思想。閱卷老師關注的是考生能否圍繞主題組織材料，寫作內容是否切題，短文的結構是否完整，表達是否正確，語言是否得體，行文是否連貫，前后文是否具有邏輯性。 有些考生在審題環節沒有弄清楚寫作目的，導致寫作內容偏離主題，甚至完全跑題，雖然考生盡量使用復雜的結構進行寫作，但還是沒能圓滿完成寫作任務。
【典例1】假如你叫李華，負責為班級的英語墻報提供稿件。請根據下面的一幅圖畫，以"On Our Way to School"為題，為墻報寫一篇稿件。 注意：詞數100左右。Rabbits tend to be quiet and alert.屬兔的人更傾向于是安靜派和警覺派。
【思路分析】從這幅漫畫中，我們看到一些學生在過馬路時，有的低頭看手機，有的陶醉在音樂中。他們全然沒有注意過往的車輛，這存在著嚴重的安全隱患。 短文的標題暗示文章的主題是"上學途中的安全問題"。考生應圍繞漫畫所反映的學生上學途中的安全問題展開論述，分析學生們在馬路上玩手機帶來的嚴重后果，引起大家對這個問題的關注。最后，應針對在上學途中應怎么做提出個人看法，呼吁大家放下手機，確保交通安全。
【學生習作】
On Our Way to School From the picture we can see that some students concentrate on their smart phones on the way to school. They pay no attention to the cars next to them. Attracted by the smart phones, the students spend most of their time on the virtual world. As senior high school students, it is our responsibility to study hard, and not bury ourselves in the virtual world, especially on our way to school. Besides, using the phone is bad for our eyes when crossing the street. Personally, we should not use the smart phones to live a safe life. So the students should not be allowed to take smart phones to their schools.
【名師點撥】
雖然作者在第一段比較準確地描述了漫畫的內容，第二段針對漫畫所反映的問題進行了分析。但是，第二段的內容并沒有緊緊圍繞"On Our Way to School"這個主題來展開。作者分析了學生們沉迷于手機的問題，而不是在上學路上玩手機可能導致的嚴重后果。最后作者得出的結論是：So the students should not be allowed to take smart phones to their schools.這與短文的主題不一致。一旦文章寫跑題，即使語言錯誤較少，考生也很難得高分。
【高分范文】
On Our Way to School From the picture we can see some students staring at their smart phones or iPads while crossing the street. They dont watch out for the passing cars or the pedestrians around them, which calls for our attention. All of us should be careful of the passing cars on our way to school. If we dont follow the traffic lights, we can put ourselves at risk. Besides, many traffic accidents result from pedestrians running the red light. Personally, safety is the first. Lets put our iPads or smart phones away on our way to school. We should always follow the traffic lights and not run the red light to keep away from accidents.
